My Own Made Pyre
On this pyre I made,Desperate here I lay.
Stolen heart, freely given;
Broken soul pulled under.
Entire life gone away,
for the empty words
of an empty heart.
My Own Made Pyre
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Tags: Emotional , Dark Poetry
Poem Commentary
Just something I scribbled down at work today, I'd love some ideas or thoughts on it.Desperate here I lay.
Stolen heart, freely given;
Broken soul pulled under.
Entire life gone away,
for the empty words
of an empty heart.
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cmlestrade commented on My Own Made Pyre
08-10-2009
- Excellent, real emotion coming through this one. Nice flow and choice of words
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