Freedom

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    Freedom
    The word I've been
    waiting.
    The feeling I've been
    waiting.
    I want to fly free
    in the wilderness.
    I don't want to get
    involve in a world
    of war.
    Yelling, hating, jealousy,
    and etc. These things
    are too much.
    I always want it to
    be together but it won't
    happen.
    Sometimes I image
    myself flying away
    from it all.
    I image love in the air.
    I image peace in everyone.
    My freedom is what I'm looking for.

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    KristyLoren commented on Freedom

    08-27-2009

    And ocean of deepness and despair. Through your piece of art I can imagine you flying like an Eagle in the sky. And thats what writing is all about, feeling the piece and Oh I did. Great write.
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    rossmangeles commented on Freedom

    07-07-2009

    Very nicely written. I love the way you crave for freedom. Keep it up! Cheers!
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    sxygrneyes874 commented on Freedom

    04-30-2009

    Beutiful. Don't give up :)
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    DeepEclipse commented on Freedom

    03-31-2009

    Keep fighting.
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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