Greif

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  • Death

    Greif

    If someone dies,
    You are sad.

    My grandmom died,
    For I screamed.

    I yelled,
    And cried.

    God has the say,
    It is his way.

    In life you want to live,
    For something makes it.

    I will and have had grief,
    She is dead.

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    SEVEN commented on Greif

    12-19-2009

    Remember the golden rule of spelling....."I b4 E except after C", here u misspelled greif--it should be spelled grief...don't worry we all make that common mistake...I only mentioned it cuz I like your writing and encourage u to continue and spellcheck and grammarcheck along the way...I can see u becoming a good writer some day....and hope I get the first book...wink....Kudos

    Dancer022597 commented on Greif

    06-10-2009

    That is so sweet! I can toally relate to this poem. It's start foward but can be viewed by different thoguths and ideas.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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