Hate

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    Hate

     (10.20.02)
    The world is empty,
    With everyone to see,
    A place for hate just for me.
    I can't understand even though I know,
    It's hard not to see when you watch it grow.
    Everybody is all the same,
    But tell them that and they will think you are lame.
    It's all just a game to find out who will resent the most,
    They will make you cry and drink a toast.
    Isn't it lovely for all of them to feed,
    It's all they know they love the greed.
    You stare into invalid places of nothing,
    They will stare back while the detrimental is cutting.
    Why do we live in such a place I sometimes wonder,
    I stumble and I miss then I begin to wander.
    I know there's a better place than this,
    But living here frist takes subjugating wits.
    Sometimes I think that I don't know how,
    But I go through each day knowing that I have to live now.

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    Beetle726 commented on Hate

    11-17-2009

    WOW! You have seemingly experienced some of the worst life has to offer. There is so much Better to be had, I hope you get it. I love your inner feeling, yet I hope you can receive more. Much more to be had if you let yourself open to it.
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    Rhaven

    11/17/2009

    Beetle, I do open up, it's the people I open up to I suppose who close off.

    Mangus commented on Hate

    07-06-2009

    Powerful picture that your words bring a new life to an already powerful image. You have definite grasp on the experience of watching on emotion build. Well written
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    Rhaven

    07/06/2009

    Thank you a lot, your words are appreciated.

    immortal commented on Hate

    07-05-2009

    hun, have you ever heard that people as a whole are stupid, but a person alone is smart? thats the only thing i can realy think of when i read this. ive been called a freak, ive been called a faget.... ive been called all of the above, but at the end of the day, i just sit in my bed and pity all the sheltered minds that believe that thier opinion matters me. i am who i am and thier words, thier glares... even thier simple little body jestures... heh idk if i made any sence right there... i kinda just blurt things out as they pop in my head.
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    AdamM commented on Hate

    06-03-2009

    I remember this. Especially the part that says: The worlds a place for hate just for me. The world is a hate for us both, I roll in it and embrace it. You were always different from us, Rhav. As we all did hard drugs, As we did things to hurt others, You disapproved, You asked why? We took you and we broke you. But mended you as well. But through it all, you still loved us. And we don't deserve you. And we love you. And miss you. Adam M
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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