Winter Moon

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    Winter Moon
    (11.15.02)
    The moonlight haze,
    Over the sunset blaze.
    I stare up as my confusion starts rising,
    What can I do until the horizon?
    I think of unspoken words,
    As I watch a flock of flying birds.
    Tear drops fall from the sky and hide my own,
    I plummet with them onto the wet soil as I think of feelings made of stone.
    I'm frozen inside with grievance pain,
    I cannot feel my heart from all the damage it has slain.
    Now I am completely surrounded by darkness,
    I don't think I can take anymore of this.
    I keep asking questions that continue unanswered,
    I think I will end my war utterly shattered.

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    Crush commented on Winter Moon

    10-14-2010

    my words regarding your poetry may seem calm and reserved but, i am jumping up and down on the inside when i read you. powerful powerful stuff ! thank you. i named my daughter Raven.
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    Tray4 commented on Winter Moon

    06-01-2009

    I love the this part (tear drops fall from the sky and hide my own) I often think of the rain as GOD crying. you are not alone in all this. (I LOVE YOU!)
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    Rhaven

    06/03/2009

    I love you too, Tray, you were always like a sister...

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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