Down Fall

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Down Fall


Look at me as if you were there every tear that rolled down my face,

Judge me, when you don't know anything, it's all I want to erase.

Throw those abominable words at me as if it's what I deserved,

Down on the floor I am broken where I continue to be unnerved.

Blame me, that my eyes were the tragedy,

Wastefully, I told you that my eyes went blind from the memory.

Punish me, for all your agoinzied suffering hate,

Kill me, by creating me as the bait.

Leave me, when I am already alone,

Cut me, as I stay the unknown.

Tuesday, May 23, 2006

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Crush commented on Down Fall

09-21-2009

so sad, but so descriptive and well written. i feel like i am here with you.

AdamM commented on Down Fall

06-03-2009

Ah. I know where this poem comes from. I caught it when you say: Blame me, that my eyes were the tragedy. Rhav, I'm so sorry. But I am not at the same time, I am selfish. So selfish. So terribly selfish.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

Rhaven’s Poems (29)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Like Me 2
Adam's Song 8
Many a Fool 3
Depths of Fire 8
Cut too deep 8
All I Begun 2
Reverie 3
Shadows of Life 1
Forgetting 3
Nothing Inside (song) 1
Hate 4
Down Fall 2
What Remains 0
Bullet Proof 0
Memories 1
Rainbow of Tears 3
Flower In The Meadow 1
No Hourglass 0
Lights 0
Winter Moon 2
Crutches 0
Frozen Fantasy 0
Ambiguities 1
Betrayed 0
Crumble 4
Denial 0
In Depths 1
Broken Mirror 1
Tormented 0