Down Fall

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Down Fall


Look at me as if you were there every tear that rolled down my face,

Judge me, when you don't know anything, it's all I want to erase.

Throw those abominable words at me as if it's what I deserved,

Down on the floor I am broken where I continue to be unnerved.

Blame me, that my eyes were the tragedy,

Wastefully, I told you that my eyes went blind from the memory.

Punish me, for all your agoinzied suffering hate,

Kill me, by creating me as the bait.

Leave me, when I am already alone,

Cut me, as I stay the unknown.

Tuesday, May 23, 2006

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Crush commented on Down Fall

09-21-2009

so sad, but so descriptive and well written. i feel like i am here with you.

AdamM commented on Down Fall

06-03-2009

Ah. I know where this poem comes from. I caught it when you say: Blame me, that my eyes were the tragedy. Rhav, I'm so sorry. But I am not at the same time, I am selfish. So selfish. So terribly selfish.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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