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Here's where I was standing when I fell down on my knees,
Praying that the sky would open up,
And swallow me completely,
Oh please God can you see me?
I'm feeling like I've had about enough.
Here's where I was crying, when I just could not go on.
And that is when He said please don't let go.
So, here is where I am right now, His mercy in the breeze,
And for a different reason,
I am praying, on my knees.

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icu2 commented on Here

03-01-2010

Nice job on this...keep up the good work. Gotta go...headache. Take care. A.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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