How You Have Changed My Life

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Since ive met you things have started to look up for me.I didnt know if there was any good women left ou there.Theres not but one and i found her. With love to you kimmie Love Joey

How You Have Changed My Life

Its funny how the little things in life matter the most. Not the cars we drive or the things we have. I thank god for all of the rain. The rain comes and takes all of my pain. You have a gental way that puts me at ease. You've come over me like a warm breeze. Something about you makes my heart go haywire. Sets it a blaze like a fire. With your love im on top of the world. I have this in my heart and im untouchable. I want only happy tears. To shed these sins and struggles ive had in the years. Your everthing i;ve ever wanted. When i talk about you i could go on and on. When i see those beautiful blue eyes looking back at me. Like a eagle in the sky you set me free. Others have broke my heart. Like lost stars they have led me to you. These things i say are passionate and true.

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saskiab1971 commented on How You Have Changed My Life

02-20-2010

This is a great poem. I love the message. Remember to capitalize the word God. I would also like to see it in smaller paragraphs for an easier read. One big paragraph is harder to read. ;)

kimmie862004 commented on How You Have Changed My Life

02-16-2010

Baby...some of the things you say are truely amazing...they are so beautiful and sincere...im so glad we met!!!

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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How You Have Changed My Life 2
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True Love 1