My Heart

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Is this you? Do you have my heart?

My Heart

I go through life putting my heart on the line. Trying to find that woman i can call mine. I dont know if it's something i say or do. To love and love till i turn blue. I just want that woman that will stay by my side. I've been hurt so much,this is why i've cried. I just want that woman i can hold and touch. Is that not enough or is it to much? These things in life are not easy to get. Is there true love or did we forget? Forget how to be honest,loving and to trust. I want to find true love not this lust. I see this woman she stare's at me. I ask myself is this it could it be? She makes me feel like im on cloud nine. I pray to god let this be her please make her mine. I can show you a true man. Just give me the chance to show you my plan.

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irielove commented on My Heart

02-15-2010

awww...ur poem makes my heart go out to you, i wish u all the luck in the world in finding that special woman!!! im sure she's out there wating for you!!! it was very well written!

kimmie862004 commented on My Heart

02-15-2010

wow this poem gave me chills honey....there is just something about it...its almost as if i can hear ur heart speaking as i read it!!!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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