Love in a blink

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To you kimmie just blink....

Love in a blink

Love in a blink we ask what this is. This love in a blink. my love is in a blink. Is this something love can do? Love speaks no words but is very true. We want to love that special someone.We want this to be true and fun. We want this love in a blink to be real. This love in a blink can we feel? This love in a blink is in our head. This love in a blink is in our bed. Have you had love in a blink? We sit back with there tears and wonder why. Why this is and why we cry. If this love is just a blink then what is it we want it to do? I want this love in a blink to be you. Can you give me this i ask? Do you have it in you to do this? Will you ask yourself why? I ask myself why. This love in a blink is on me. Is it true can it be? Is there things in life that we want? Just think what is this love in a blink? This love in a blink has happened so fast. This love in a blink i want to grasp. I did not know this love in a blink was true. Now i am wrong because i met you.

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saskiab1971 commented on Love in a blink

02-16-2010

sounds good.....you missed one blank to blink ;) i like the questions that you ask in the poem. very inquisitive :)

kimmie862004 commented on Love in a blink

02-15-2010

awwwwwwwwww........u made me blush.......like usual!!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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