LIFE

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    LIFE

    There are things in life we can not explain. Some are good some are pain. More importantly there is a gain. We dont know why thing are the way they are. You can only live your life one day at a time. Sometimes its sweet sometimes bitter like a lime. One thing i have learned is this. Life is good just like a sexual bliss. We sit back and think about all we have done. Some is good full of fun. Sometimes its bad enough to make us cry. We sit back and ask the lord above why. He has a place for us in this life and we ask why. Then we find out why and we cry. His place for us is to be with him in the sky.

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    kimmie862004 commented on LIFE

    02-15-2010

    very talented...don't ever forget it hun!!!!...Hallmark doesn't know what they are missing!!

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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