PAIN

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God rest your soul mom i love and miss you dearly. One day after life i will be with you. This i know is true.

PAIN

Back in 1984 my mom was blessed with me. Another son of her own a son to be. I went trough life loving her so. Never knowing one day she must go. I thought she would always always be here. In 2006 i had to face my fears. My joy,my friend,my everything was gone. I look to the sky to tell god he's wrong. This was not the time to take her yet. He had done this with no threat. I have begged and pleaded to get her back. Not realizing just one fact. One day i will be at those gate's touching her hand. Living in eternal life and that is grand. Time has gone and i still have this thought. I have lost this war that i faught. There is alot i have learned and alot i've gained. My love,my life,my mother she has no more pain.

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saskiab1971 commented on PAIN

02-20-2010

This is another great poem!!! Capitalize God and break up the paragraph into lines if you can :)

kimmie862004 commented on PAIN

02-15-2010

Baby that is so touching...and it hits home to me too....u are just so extremely talented, its amazing!!!

btt313 commented on PAIN

02-15-2010

thats a good one! i miss and love her too.she was the best mom ever!

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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