I give up

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    • LanaAuLani
    • Ok So I'm back in my house after the eight months in the woods because of the fire. Everything seems to be ok now. I guess we will have to work with that. btw I do have my lip redone. Yay for quilting needles.

    I give up
    The words she writes gives you a window to her world
    she opens doors to something new
    the things she sees are strange and beautiful
    things maybe you once knew

    her silhouette in shadows dance
    to strange harmonies
    these butterflies of her once love
    revert to melodies

    She's letting go of what she knew
    so soft and bitter-sweet
    her only tears she has to share
    she sheds for you to see

    No longer hiding in the dark
    her shadows fade from view
    She stands to face the light ahead
    to say her love is true

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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    LanaAuLani’s Poems (19)

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    unnamed 3 0 12/26/2009
    Perfect night 0 08/08/2009
    Long Road Home 0 05/26/2009
    Welcome Back 0 05/20/2009
    Evening's last drink 0 04/25/2009
    frozen 1 04/19/2009
    The Fire 0 03/22/2009
    personal demons 0 03/18/2009
    Butterflies 0 02/22/2009
    I give up 0 02/22/2009
    The sun shines only in dreams 1 02/22/2009
    Time 0 02/22/2009
    Unbound 0 02/21/2009
    Her Majesty 1 02/21/2009
    Unnamed 2 0 02/20/2009
    Dedicated to the one I loved 0 02/20/2009
    Last words to you. 0 02/20/2009
    Luna 0 02/20/2009
    Unnamed 1 0 02/20/2009
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