frozen

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  • Anger
    • LanaAuLani
    • Ok So I'm back in my house after the eight months in the woods because of the fire. Everything seems to be ok now. I guess we will have to work with that. btw I do have my lip redone. Yay for quilting needles.

    frozen

    This metal breaching flesh
    embracing my true self
    through dehumanizing means

    He says I'm closed to him
    my heart, the only thing untouched
    by the metal that has pierced all else

    How can he accept me
    He can't see all of me
    He is blind to what is in front of him

    He turns a cold eye away from me
    I stand, frozen in fear
    His words Ice, my prison

    Through pain of the flesh
    I can numb pain of the soul
    How else can I explain to him?

    I can't.

    Everything in me I wear for all to see
    How he analyzes it is up to him.
    Embittered, I keep going

    More metal, more pain
    Numbing everything
    Though his words still burn

    Branded deeper than soul
    They echo in this prison of ice
    His words scar and bleed me dry

    Acceptance is all I ask
    Not so much from someone
    Who claims to love all of me

    Yet it seems impossible
    To breach his frigid heart
    It will burn like me before I'm gone


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    TREVON commented on frozen

    12-08-2011

    Great poem I could feel you through out your journey. Your words I feel allowed me to see you.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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