I'll Wait

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    I'll Wait

    The night lights a fire that glows in every valley,
    The days warmth to keep.
    Sinking between the hills,
    Shimmering across the deep.
    Below the hills where silver water flows,
    Night calls a million star's that are twice as bright.
    As the falling white snow.
    Midnight frost's the evergreens,
    Silver clings to every tip.
    Reminding me of the promises,
    That hung on your lips.
    I hear a distant baying,
    Beneath the splended moon,
    Where the night creature's circle.
    Lonely hearts in tune.
    Yet for me the night,
    Shall never grow late.
    Beneath the lover's moon,
    My lonely heart will wait.

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    kdarcy commented on I'll Wait

    07-18-2010

    Soft, but sure in its message, well done with the descriptions, loved the lovers moon and waiting, be well, k

    Derico commented on I'll Wait

    09-12-2009

    A real poet's tune. Deep and insightful! Good writing.

    SpiritSong commented on I'll Wait

    07-30-2009

    Thank you libra..I love this poem..a fav for me. It shines forth as Loves enduring promise...and the heart that goe's on and on...love it...thank you for giving us such a gift..."SpiritSong"

    dewachen commented on I'll Wait

    05-14-2009

    Very colorful poem, brings out the emotions which speak volumes from your creative center.

    Vincent commented on I'll Wait

    03-22-2009

    (GP) very creative, smiles Vincent

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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