Immolation

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    Immolation

    A damp rat infested market.
    A whole sale on souls. I’m stumbling over
    beaten spirits, just to prove how far society has
    fallen, while bodies lie bloated and dying.

    Mange ingested life forms,
    callous calls to return home, are answered
    w/ diaphragm deep suffering bellows. Hollowing
    out the carriers of wisdom’s beautiful meadows.
    Selflessly screaming, “leave me alone!”

    I find myself watching the hour hand stop,
    just before I begin to dream.

    My mind never forgives the images
    I’ve forced upon it, while a television blares,
    and tires begin screeching. The urine laden breath of
    the streets howling awakes me, b/c my stomach’s
    reminding me I’m hungry.

    Hair in tangles and mats. My shirt’s
    as clean as one fabric softener sheet can go, stolen
    from aisle two of your local department store.

    I find myself watching the hour hand stop,
    just before I begin to dream.

    The olives, and fruit are freshest
    if you can remember the day and time of the harvest.
    none the less I obsess to shower, shit, and shave.
    What a shame, from promise to slave.

    I window shop everyday, watching
    families gather for dinner, a perfect paradise,
    a malicious maze of malice covered by disguise,
    or was it design?

    I find myself watching the hour hand stop,
    just before I begin to dream.

    I’ll have to remember to solve this.
    It’s definitely no riddle, or intricate anagram.
    No, the answer’s there, but I’m hungry and I’ve barely
    five minutes to spare.

    A thousand times,
    I just keep remembering it rhymed
    when he said it, but to blame Uncle Sam and
    his clan makes me a scapegoat of all militant
    minded philosophers, just look at Socrates; damn
    I really need something to eat.

    I find myself watching the hour hand stop,
    just before I begin to dream.

    This world of chaos is spinning
    rapidly, perched upon the middle finger of Allah.
    I knew that would draw some serious symbolism,
    can’t you just see him laughing about our conclusion?
    Hopefully, this has relieved you of your daily
    dose of criticism.

    I haven’t lost focus, don’t you worry.
    Yeah, I know, “FUCK THE SYSTEM!” Now will
    you please be quiet, I’m trying to breathe while
    knowing it.

    I find myself watching the hour hand stop,
    just before I begin to dream.

    A rapid transformation, or
    metamorphosis has just occurred. I think all
    that Eastern meditation bullshit is actually
    starting to work; b/c I don’t feel a damn thing.

    “think hard now, can you remember
    what it is you were trying to say?”
    “yeah, I love sanity b/c drifting
    through pain can take on symbolism, just so
    it will go away.”

    ………and I still find myself watching the
    hour hand stop, just before I begin to dream of my
    death.

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    Nev commented on Immolation

    04-16-2009

    I like your writing style, alot like mine. keep it up

    LouKyBabe commented on Immolation

    03-25-2009

    WOW...what a creative mind you have...great job. very deep but oh so true...i give it an A+.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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