Rigidity US

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    Rigidity US

    The sound of urban sprawl, the music

    of a soul’s vocally verbose interruption.

    Caged thoughts, poetic justice, frequencies

    of apathy laced between headphones,

    a reverberating, ocular clarity.

     

    Invasive odors spoil the mood, as pavement

    digests this single protein of synthesized

    might. Provoked to quit, but it’s the

    intensity of the fight tantalizing, and

    intriguing this winged warrior of

    thought. To soar, no glide, no slide,

    no, to enter his incoherent sound with

    those of the other thousands striking

    paved aspirations with each nonchalant

    gate.

     

    A boy on a bike,

    A cops whining siren,

    the noise of societal music,

    a muffled shuffling, caged

    for clarity the tinker thinks.

    They hustle to their next destination.

    Asking for no names,

    and forgetting without hesitation.

    A contagious infection;

    due process, or natural selection?

    A side of life soiled by repetition,

    a constant selfish sense of volition.

     

    Cancerous tentacles engulfing

    every dendrite, synapses, memory,

    idea, and thought; engaged in a

    battle for recognition. A collective

    competitive selective process, the

    individual lost.  Where arbitrary

    idealisms shape reality with another

    drive by fatality. A place where calls

    for leaders echo from alley ways, and

    side street short cuts, are answered

    with the pounding stampede of feet

    trying to finish their own race.

    Landscapes stained by the blood

    of our advancement. Large sores

    puss forth, every sign points to a purging

    of us, but we continue to swear the

    canvas unfurls further.

     

    Our social institutions are accented with

    the angst of our young. Taught to keep

    the motion monotonous, take no time

    to examine the subjects, while the lesson

    forgets them. Modern man’s call for

    mercy, but it’s advancement; of product,

    proper conduct, that keeps the conduit

    subservient. Just another burnt out fuse,

    standing along with millions of others, the

    working  control center of a self defeatist

    organism I call urban sprawl.

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    lonewolf commented on Rigidity US

    03-11-2010

    this is a masterpiece of work. not to many can write with such imagery. you are one talented writer. i have to read more

    DarknessDivine commented on Rigidity US

    03-10-2010

    This was a very well written poem. I love your word use and your flow used in this. I have to agree with super, very talented!

    CdeM

    03/10/2010

    Dark, thanks... I work long, and hard on fluidity, and thought processes I appreciate you're appreciation...

    SuperChick76 commented on Rigidity US

    03-10-2010

    Oh.. My.. God.. That was utterly AMAZING! You, my friend, are one talented poet. The imagery and the phrasing was ingenious! It just consumes all thoughts and you can see the path take of "civilization" and humanity and what we have become. Brilliantly written, my friend. Added to my favorites.

    CdeM

    03/10/2010

    Thank you Super, I am content with my day you've made it...

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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