Not For the Apathetic

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    Not For the Apathetic

    Being of strong mind, and capable thought;
    another lesson is heaved into the bubbling
    cauldron. Mixing race with culture, and
    calling it class. Resulting in a flimsy
    structure of many long centuries painfully
    remembered.

    There’s an ear shattering creak, as rusty
    fulcrums scream under the weight, under
    the burden of opening; no longer obstructing
    the way.
    Portraits dangle on walls, without eyes,
    the pictures appear appalling, appealing to
    a morbid sense of understanding their
    meaning, while the slippery remnants of
    recollection leak their way through crevices,
    cut naturally by adaptation.
    Cupped hands lead upward to sip the
    awakening water, to quench sleeps
    invasive thirst. Lips pursed in anticipation,
    but finding nothing.

    The hallways are long, narrow, and
    ominous. The script sewn into the carpet
    remains guiding, luring eyes to an inscription,
    a proposition, a base formula, a base
    acknowledgement of it’s traveler’s plight.

    “To whom it may concern,
    A voyeur watches without being seen,
    it’s the danger of being caught that makes it
    so exotic, or so he thinks.”

    Like an added post script
    the construct continues,
    “To whom it may concern,
    …agitating festering wounds bleeds
    one of incurable diseases, but open to the
    elements infection is unavoidable,
    is destiny.”

    Breathing deep, the wall’s rows of names
    seem to bicker with one another. The last
    feeling passed over by the next, but so
    goes memorials to the fallen.
    Wonting hands laid upon recessed text, feeling
    remorse, appreciating the context, but
    portraits of humanities wars are better left
    forgotten by promises of a brighter future,
    darkened by the shadows of even more
    visitors.
    Each one feeling betrayed, their words
    are anachronisms for life, each a piece of
    memories that puzzle.
    Reflections seen in pools of water, wine,
    and blood. They set themselves at the table
    of divine intervention, consecrating the partakers
    in the challenges of wisdom, folly, and atrocity.
    The wandering eye of fellowship focuses all
    too often on the flock, not it’s proceedings,
    and the floor reads,
    “To whom it may concern,
    Hubris is the elixir of apathetic fools
    too self conscious to doubt their integrity,
    and too mindful of appearance to check
    their arrogance.”

    Maybe they’re wrong, maybe constructing
    theories of bigotry into philosophy is
    democracy. The branches serve as perches
    for vultures eyeing the fatigued mass of
    flesh, hair, and fingernail. Lost in an unrelenting
    question better left to the professors of entropy,
    consumed and propagated, used to nourish
    the whole, procuring fate.

    The dimly lit corridor rises, then falls. An
    immense sense of fear rifles through the body,
    for the first fallen sojourner is found, clutching
    tight to a book, as though the worst to come
    was locked inside, locked within his grasp.
    The books titled, “Fleeting Souls”
    struck by irony, and fueled by suspicion
    the first page reads,
    “…and after me another will come to see,
    but before death must be victory. In these dim
    lights the only way out is the death of struggle; the
    psyche’s want for identity.”

    Vaulted ceilings, artistry slaved over for
    centuries. Looking up, consuming the
    craftsmanship he has no clue where he’s
    going. The floor remains guiding, the
    portraits appalling, but it’s the ceiling that seems
    so supported, reminding him of his own
    demons, his own hand crafted cages.
    One foot after another, the journey’s long, and
    sadly disappointing, but this is after all
    a social ladder, a climb for status, a birth
    right to die before witnessing the awe inspiring
    vision life has procured for those whose hunger for
    definition remains insatiable.

    In the distance the door booms closed.
    He grasps the past sojourner’s mind entrapment,
    and takes another step forward.
    Whispering to himself,
    “I’m in here somewhere.”

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    Sydney commented on Not For the Apathetic

    09-22-2009

    this seems to be a timeless classic sitting in a closet, gathering dust. but at the same time, this poem had me lost within its wording, its storyline, had me going in a maze or in a cathedral looking for an answer or at the memorials in D.C.

    Alekar commented on Not For the Apathetic

    07-07-2009

    deep and yet shallow, i really like this one alot and i cant say that about alot of peoples works.

    danbi commented on Not For the Apathetic

    06-02-2009

    You have a lot going on with this piece and your frustration is noted. Unlike a lot of socio-political pieces I've read, you put yours out in a sort of unfolding manner that builds upon itself beautifully...and then let us go with a feeling of being lost, overwhelmed. I like this piece very much. Thank you for sharing.

    Artie commented on Not For the Apathetic

    05-23-2009

    I'm dizzy!! lol- ladies and gentleman, we have a wordsmith here. Highly impressive piece of work. I enjoyed this start to finish.

    CdeM

    05/27/2009

    Thanks brother, one of my favorite pieces...

    Nev commented on Not For the Apathetic

    04-16-2009

    For some reason, I feel we have met before and you know exactly how I feel, this poem is amazing. Please dont take that as a pick up line, I know it might sound like one, but this poem sent shivers down my spine. It almost took my breath away

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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