Inside Cry

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Inside Cry

So much sadness

So much pain

my soul feels lost

my heart feels slain.

 

Complete confusion

it deepens each day

unfamiliar emotions

with my mind do play.

 

I ask for the council,

I need understand

for the shaking to cease

from the depths of my hands.

 

©1985 KMDavis-Scheuer (Age 14)

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Rhymer commented on Inside Cry

08-10-2010

Feel the pain emitting from this write soaking all the way through to the bone. 10

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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