Interferance

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    Interferance
    Tears on my pillow
    there each night
    They take all my strength
    none left to fight

    I taste of salt
    from many tears
    Intense pressure built up
    from all my fears

    Who can I turn to?
    Do I run to You?
    If that is my decision,
    what will you do?

    Now come horrifying thoughts
    My mind fills with my past
    Memories come rushing in
    so nothing will last

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    redbloodink commented on Interferance

    02-02-2010

    I'm going to say this write didn't have the intensity the last few did.... I still liked it especially the beginning.... red
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    redbloodink

    02/02/2010

    I have to agree with Fluv...... I was going to have to leave that comment... cause they have been 10 or way more from me...... but this was a solid 10....... red

    fluv77 commented on Interferance

    03-02-2009

    I have read about four of your poems already and all of them in my opinion have been very strong tens. I tryied to re-rate it but it want let me give the tens, only a point or so higher than the one posted. who's rating these poems. are they kidding. TEN.
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    Vincent commented on Interferance

    02-04-2009

    (GP) I think you are a good poet, smiles Vincent
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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