Void

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    Void
    There is no more sadness
    just teasing whispers of regret
    a sharp sense of finality
    No more tears or hopes
    for tomorrow being better
    only numbing coldness
    Desire, passion, gentleness bone dry
    vast emptiness remains

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    spbsdude commented on Void

    09-25-2009

    When we lose a love or are rejected truly there is a void left inside of us. You beautifully describe that kind of situation. I have felt the void myself, but in time it is filled if you fill your life with all the good things in the world that can bring a sense of beauty that surrounds us.
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    markrohaley commented on Void

    01-21-2009

    good but sad-read Alone that I wrote an see if you are inspired. actually will like both of mine i think. i will read ur others an thank you .God is real His name is Yeshua alias Jesus in Him mark
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    rollerderby commented on Void

    01-16-2009

    Well written my dear, A very sad poem on a subject that many of us are familiar with. I hope the pain is fading and the sun is shinning in your world now. Doug
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    gogant commented on Void

    01-15-2009

    Nice poem, but I hope not for you...
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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