Invisible

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    Invisible
    When I am invisible...
    there is nothing to see...
    When I am invisible...
    there is nothing to me...
    When I am invisible...
    there is no pain...
    When I am invisible...
    I have no shame...
    When I am invisible...
    there is no light or dark...
    When I am invisible...
    When I am invisible...
    I cringe and cower...
    When I am invisible...
    I have all the power...
    When I am invisible...
    I know where I am...
    When I am invisible...
    I am less than a man...
    When I am invisible...
    I see the pain on your face...
    When I am invisible...
    I know my place...
    when...
    I...
    am...
    INVISIBLE

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    Browerlady commented on Invisible

    05-13-2009

    I was ok, but it was not one of your better ones. All of the other ones I could feel them deep inside when I read them. This one just skimmed the surface.
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    Kagome13 commented on Invisible

    05-09-2009

    good
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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