Sickness

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Sickness

 there's a sickness inside of me... 
 crawling around... 
 waiting to be set free... 
 waiting for new victims to be found... 
 there's a sickness here... 
 clutching at my heart... 
 it does rend and tear... 
 shredding it apart... 
 there's a sickness beneath my skin... 
 making me ill... 
 revealing my sin... 
 destroying my will... 
 there's a sickness today... 
 that I can't cure... 
 not knowing what to say... 
 to that woman most pure... 
 there's a sickness overwhelming... 
 my body and soul...
 washing over me, ever tantalizing... 
 in the way it ravages me whole... 
 there's a sickness in me... 
 every day my life begins to die...
 can't you see... 
 I'm waiting for that angel from on high... 
 illness... 
 inside of me... 
 sickness... 
 killing me... 
 sickness 

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susanismith commented on Sickness

06-25-2009

YOU KNOW EVERY READER IS GOING TO TAKE IT IN THE WAY THEY READ IT, SO I CAN ONLY HOPE THAT YOU DON'T TAKE ANY OFFENSE TO THIS, BUT I SAW IT IN TWO WAYS AND BOTH EXCELLENT...ONE I THOUGHT INSTANTLY THE SICKNESS WAS 'LOVE' AND TWO THE TRANSFORMATION OF A 'BIRTH OF A VAMPIRE' (THE SICKNESS KILLING THE HUMANITY...) EITHER WAY, I ENJOYED THAT POEM. CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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