Just One Day
I wish I could see you so muchKiss your lips.............................. feel your touch.
But just one day would not be enough with you........................
Because at the end, I would ask for 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just One Day
7 Comments
Tags: Confusion
Poem Commentary
Ever ask for just one more day with someone but you know deep inside that day would make you want more?Kiss your lips.............................. feel your touch.
But just one day would not be enough with you........................
Because at the end, I would ask for 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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CraigStyle commented on Just One Day
12-30-2011
- Simply beautiful...Enough said...I'm smiling for love, I'm smiling for the possibility of love and how your piece reflects it's light, it's passion, it's realness in a way that makes it so relatable....THANK YOU!
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Musicmynded1 commented on Just One Day
11-04-2010
- very sweet writing here ma friend.. so much said with so little words... i like it.
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phatdaddee commented on Just One Day
11-02-2010
- GOOD POEM! SHORT AND SWEET! WHAT A WONDERFUL FEELING HUH?
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KING commented on Just One Day
05-28-2010
- If anyone who reads this doesnt smile they dont understand love or emotions. Great piece.
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06/01/2010
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CraigStyle commented on Just One Day
04-20-2010
- This made smile, Sometimes in matters of the heart saying a little can communicate so much. Once again commenting with a smile!
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04/21/2010
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