The Picture

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    The Picture

     I have been staring at your picture thinking about the things we use to do. Looking at it thinking of all the things we went threw. Was it your fault or was it mine that this picture got left behind.
    Was it left so that it could break my heart everytime I see your smiling face? Or was it by accident that it was left sitting in its place?
    I look it and wonder should I take it down and throw it away? Or should I leave it sitting there as if you where coming back to stay?
    I only no that it makes it hard for me to move on ...when Im always asking myself was it me or you that did each other wrong?Everytime I reach for it and try to put it away , something happens in my heart that lets that picture stay.
    But I can feel it the day is getting close when I can rech for it and no that there is only one place for it to go.
    I'll take it and wrap it tenderly in paper the way your arms use to wrap around me. But only this time the wrapping will finally set me free.

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    rellyrelll commented on The Picture

    07-10-2009

    this is great this is more like an story and a poem at a same time but what ever it is its great and its the truth i love when poets say what they feel and thats what u felt and in a way i can tell how u felt when u wrote it thats how great your flow is:)
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    GucciGurl

    07/13/2009

    Thaxs 4 da comment. This is straight from the heart . U will c that I am a free style writter. Sum times I just start typing wat is happening to me in the moment. That is wat makes your best work

    cryptic77 commented on The Picture

    07-07-2009

    I think that in many ways we have all been here and I know that if you haven't .. you soon will be, but it will take ... to know what needs to be done and hard is easy but right is hard..
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    GucciGurl

    07/07/2009

    Thanks for your comments. I always enjoy evveryones comments and thoughts

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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