Madness I

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    Madness I
    I can feel it pouring through my veins... I'm trapped.

    I can feel confusing thoughts... I'm trapped.

    I can feel no escape from my mind... I'm trapped.

    I can feel aches of the burdens... I'm trapped.

    Does it matter if you know?

    Do I look like I'm in pain?

    Do I affect your life the same?

    Do I scare you the same?

    Time can heal and time can destroy... I'm alone.

    Time can be still or time too fast... I'm alone.

    Time can open and time can close... I'm alone.

    Time can pass or time can last... I'm alone.

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    maryann72961 commented on Madness I

    02-16-2009

    I find this poem to be sad. your feelings of being alone and trapped come through so strong.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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