16 Hours

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    16 Hours
    16 Hours, desert lightning...
    16 Hours, desert lightning...

    Headed west to find the right thing.

    Stopped in Vegas out on my way.

    Met these girls that wanted me to stay.

    With these girls, it was hard to choose.

    It's not up to me who's gonna win or lose.

    16 hours desert lightning...
    16 hours desert lightning...

    Headed out west to find the right thing.

    I told these girls to meet me for a beer.

    They told me they didn't want to share.

    Behind each other I met them alone.

    Explained to them, I'm a roll'n stone.

    16 hours desert lightning...
    16 hours desert lightning...

    (Fade) Headed west to do the right thing.......

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    lovebastard commented on 16 Hours

    03-03-2009

    cool cool...
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    vixyzhalo commented on 16 Hours

    02-18-2009

    Interesting.
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    EvilEyes commented on 16 Hours

    02-18-2009

    16 hours brings me back home... great write.
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    cottonluv commented on 16 Hours

    02-17-2009

    i agree it sound like a song but i like it.put a beat to and record it lol.good work
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    StraytRootz commented on 16 Hours

    02-17-2009

    cool poem. sounds like a fun trip on a harley.
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