Blind Spot of Life

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    Blind Spot of Life

    As the tide rises the water shall break.
    The wind will blow as I fall asleep.
    I feel the faint mist of rain.
    Almost asleep, I feel no pain.

    Elderly are fragile.
    Let the rapid tide be their strength.
    A cup of passion be their sake.
    Tides mending the ache of mistake.

    A fire was once a flame.
    A thorn once a seed.
    As day becomes night, a spark becomes light.
    Step after step is a blind spot of life.

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    kayjill commented on Blind Spot of Life

    07-19-2009

    worded very sweetly!!! i like it... it says it exact

    acjtb commented on Blind Spot of Life

    03-11-2009

    excellent

    cottonluv commented on Blind Spot of Life

    02-18-2009

    nice,short and powerful.good work

    bforibus commented on Blind Spot of Life

    02-18-2009

    that was deeply profound and the flow as excellent. great poem. loved the visual gaveit a 10

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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