Moon

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  • Baybie_Rawr
  • Okay guys. I don't use this account anymore for those who even care. I've created a new OP called Bombthatasian. I'm going to transfer all my poems over. Just letting you guys know, so I'm not accused of plagiarism. I'll be deleting this account very shortly.

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i'm in a strange poetic mood .

Moon

The sun has left for its nap
and it's the moon's time to shine
shine with a stolen light
the moon radiates mystery
a mystery not her own
she never hides , but can only been seen by night
when the sun is away
for the sun outshines her
her the moon
she can and will only make her appearance
when the sun has left her spotlight
she is there by day , but no one sees
the white circle as alone as can be
she's stilll there without a doubt
but the sun is what it's all about
the moon can only watch and stare
and wish the moon was half as fair
and if the moon was to ever dare
steal the sun's spotlight
then only once a blue moon
when the moon is fuller than usual
and when she can shine on her own
then every blue moon she shall
for once in awhile
the moon will step in front
instead of behind
because even the sun needs its time in the shadows

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Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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