Don't tell Mama , Shh Shh

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    Don't tell Mama , Shh Shh

     I'm scared
    I'm hiding
    I did nothing wrong
    But he's hitting me
    And bruising me until I cry
    He doesn't care , only for himself
    But Don't tell Mama , Shh Shh
    She'll take his side
    oh yes , she might
    or maybe she will die from fright
    He doesn't care
    Because he's growing up
    He acts so smart
    But is so dumb
    He cares for himself only
    but he lies and lies
    He's hitting me
    and he's bruising me
    I'm crying
    He keeps on lying
    When others are around
    He smiles and laugh
    But when we come home
    it's all different
    Don't tell Mama , Shhh Shhh
    She can't know
    No she can't
    She'll worry over me
    But he's leaving soon
    I hope i hope
    but until he leaves
    Don't tell Mama, Shh Shh !

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    Oblaidon commented on Don't tell Mama , Shh Shh

    11-25-2009

    Good Write. You are beyond your years. Please read, my "Heart of a Poet". Thx
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    Paleidia commented on Don't tell Mama , Shh Shh

    07-22-2009

    I agree with the others . If someone is hurting you, you need to tell someone right away! You don't need to suffer and you shouldn't! PLEASE tell someone. I don't consider this a poem, I feel it is a cry for help. I'll be here for you too.
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    Smurf1 commented on Don't tell Mama , Shh Shh

    07-22-2009

    All I can say is (WOE!!!!!) This doesn't sound like a poem, I realy hope it is!!! But If you need a freind, hit me up, or talk to someone you trust. I have a thirteen year old daughter, and reading this poen Don't tell mama, is terrifying. Who ever this person is, in this short poem; all they have to do is reach out, and the world will listen, you've allready gotten my ettention!!!
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    Baybie_Rawr

    07/22/2009

    Thanks Smurf! Well this was actually because i had watched Law and Order SVU and the girl wouldn't tell her mom about what was happening so this poem came to mind! :)

    wheelsal commented on Don't tell Mama , Shh Shh

    07-22-2009

    I hope this isn't real life. If it is please tell Mama. You are special and not one should hurt you. I suggested classes. Don't you have creative writing in school? Never say never. I finished my college at about 45 and am still going to school Call me grandma Sally
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    Baybie_Rawr

    07/22/2009

    Thanks Grandma Sally! I had watched Law and Order SVU and the girl wouldn't tell her mom what was happening and this poem came up in my mind!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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