Mountain

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  • Baybie_Rawr
  • Okay guys. I don't use this account anymore for those who even care. I've created a new OP called Bombthatasian. I'm going to transfer all my poems over. Just letting you guys know, so I'm not accused of plagiarism. I'll be deleting this account very shortly.

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Mountain

Lately things have gone wrong
I'm looking everywhere
I'm stuck on the wrong side of the mountain
I'm screaming and screaming
and there's nobody but an echo
what an echo that echoes

Uh oh
I shouldn't have scream
Because now there's an avalanche
Where will i hide?
Where will i go?
The waterfall of snow is getting closer
3..2..1..

There's nothing but a sheet of white
I'm stuck underneath a blanket of snow
The bitter cold is invading my every sense
I see nothing but white
is this heaven?

I'm looking everywhere
I'm stuck on the wrong side of the mountain
the unstable dangerous side
Don't know what will happen
No i do not
It's so unstable

Another avalanche is heading this way
I'm losing my mind
I'm losing my grip of sanity
I'm stuck on the wrong side of the mountain
The unstable , dangerous side .

Avalanche , avalanche
There's nothing but a sheet of white
You don't see the girl stuck underneath
The cold is invading
And the warmth is being lost
Is this heaven?

I'm not stuck on the wrong side of the mountain
not anymore .
I've lost my grippings .
I've fallen off .
I've lost my sanity
I've lost my mind

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In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

Baybie_Rawr’s Poems (20)

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Me 1
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Through 0
Insanity 0
Moon 0
Mountain 0
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Winning me over 0
Tatiana 0
Call my name 0
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I thank you 2
Smother 3
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Come Back 1
My fault 4
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