Naw really it's great being unattached

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    I am a Scottish person living in England and write a lot in my own dialect using words and phrases that you would only here in Scotland if any one has any difficulty in understanding what I have writing let me know and I will do my best to explain

    Naw really it's great being unattached

     Naw really it's great being unattached
    Nae pressure, nae hassle, lovers tiffs 'n' that
    Nae hideing, lieing, pretending, offending
    Aye 'n' nae big brother tae kick yer hied in
    Nae wan there unpainted, unmasked
    Nae probing minds bringing up the past
    Nae old flames growling 'n' making eyes
    'N' nae need fur telling blunt faced lies
    Nae guilty thoughts, nae presents bought
    Nae wan tae know if ye did or not
    Nae wan a'taw that comes up tae scratch
    Naw really it's great being unattached
    Ye know waking up on yer tod 'n' that
    Nae wan tae occupy yer mind
    Ye know some wan who's always on yer side
    Nae hands tae hold, nae stories told
    Nae wan there tae keep oot the cold
    Nae mate, pal 'n' nae best friend
    Aye 'n' nae understanding ear tae bend
    Naw really it's great being unattached

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    niiskadat commented on Naw really it's great being unattached

    08-08-2009

    you've got the right of it, no big brothers to kick your head in, but alas 4 older sisters' due just fine, all the same;) I'll let you know in another 4 1/2 yrs if it's still good to be unattached, lol
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