Oh Please

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    Oh Please

     Oh, turn my eyes from these worthless things and give me life through your loving word.
     
    I've traveled this road many times before, traveling along in such a corrupt world.
     
     
     
    Oh, give me the strength to move mountains that stand in my way,
     
    or give me the courage to climb them.
     
     
     
    The rocks that I stumble on, they toss me about,
     
    Oh, please give me one to stand upon.
     
     
     
    The valleys I'm in the pathways aren't clear,
     
    Oh, please lighten the path so I'll find the right one.
     
     
     
    This ship that I'm sailing its sail is withered and torn.
     
    Oh, please be the sail that gets me where I'm going.

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    Phission commented on Oh Please

    09-20-2012

    i love this. there are some moments where i said, "woah" out of pure enjoyment of your word. nice poem...well done.
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    cttgad

    09/20/2012

    Thank you Phission :) I am glad you enjoyed it and I look forward to reviews on the others. Enjoy

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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