Would You Love Me?

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    Would You Love Me?

    If I spoke but said nothing at all, would you hear me?

    My silent words like subliminal messages

    altering you forever.

     

    If the warmth of my lips caressed yours would you feel it?

    Every caress, every breath giving you life,

    an endless need to take deeper breaths.

     

    If the tenderness of my skin was to sweep across yours

    like a warm soothing breeze on a summer day,

    Would you sense it?

     

    If your desire for me 

    was like a deep sobbing

    from the very center of your soul,

    Would you love me?

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    slimgoodwoody commented on Would You Love Me?

    11-29-2012

    Great poem and I agree with E.O.R. that last stanza is earth shattering!! Loved it!
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    EyesOfRain commented on Would You Love Me?

    09-30-2012

    The last stanza is so emotionally overwhelming and deep. I love this. You have great talent!
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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