Our Love and the Candle

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    Our Love and the Candle
    Our love is like a candle burning so bright
    Always glowing, and bruning strong.

    When the candle burns out, so will our love.
    But will it be time for our love to end?

    Our when the candle dies down will our love die with it?
    Will there be no sparks to keep us together?

    My heart is still full of love and the candle still bruns.
    It lights the whole room, so I know it's our turn.

    Our turn for our love to glow, like a candle in the night.
    Our love and the candle will always burn, burn so bright!

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    poetess12 commented on Our Love and the Candle

    10-02-2009

    this poem is good but the theme and style don't create surprise anymore for this style is almost present in every poem
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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