release me

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    release me

             release me
            because i let you go
            its like im shedding a new skin
            and i cant take it nomore
            all your faults made me your weakness
            my eyes cant take no more tears
            you left me standing
            with so much fears
            but then it was to much for you to hold
            so instead you said words and you let me go
            release me so i can let go
            i dont wanna feel your touch
            i cant take it nomore
            for where your passion lies
            it becomes my hate
            all the stuff you did
            was for your sake
            your trouble lies straight ahead
            instead of using ur heart
            you couldnt think with your head
            its to much damage
            now i have to learn
            you want me to trust you
            but never again
            release me
           cause i cant take nomore
           letting you come back
           that you will never do
           release me for now im letting go
          

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    realitykat commented on release me

    06-06-2011

    very powerful...i have been there too. your writtiing is so personal and so real...we write the smiliar i think. thanks for sharing
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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