what you give is what you get

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    what you give is what you get

             i cant believe that i gave you so much
             and once again you mess up my heart
             its like a sin, trying to love you
             you was my everything 
             thats why it was so simple
             but i cant let go of the bad things
             thats why i aint with u
             i tried to find the good
             but the bad out weighed our love
             so why do i blame myself
             is it because,i always told you i'd never 
             give up?i can see how true love can make 
             you not love yourself as much
             i talk to you and its like u wanna
             act so tuff,but when i leave you
             you cry so much
              you confuse me and its tearing me
              up,but i know its right,just like the light
              i must cut you off so i can be free
             
             

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    BigDaddyCash commented on what you give is what you get

    11-22-2009

    I don't know why so many young lovers get lost in the quest for life. Is it because they don't give enough of themselves to lay a strong foundation to build their castle of dreams or is it because they take more than they give. If you feel that what you give is what you get and you really believe that to be true then you should give all that you’ve got and then some. If you want the great rewards life has to offer then bond your relationship with the strongest adhesive. Treat love like you would a rose garden, use the most fertile soil, cultivate and nurture it and water it with sweat and tears. I started to write you compliment for your poetic arrangement of words but the writer in me took control of my keyboard and when that happens all I can do is let the words flow. My fingers took over and printed out more than I intended to give and my comment turned into a synopsis for your talented poetic endeavor. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. LOL, BDC
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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