Shattered Souls

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    Shattered Souls
    Love simply ain't for me
    Could be the ugly exterior
    everyone tends to see
    I have my good days, and
    also my bad
    Seems just to get
    dumped on
    Maybe, the best day I could have
    My approach to people seems
    to only limit me
    Because of the ugliness
    people only tend to see
    Neglected into a life that
    shouldn't just be
    Again of the ugliness that
    people tend to see
    Wish I could appease the lot
    And be excepted for what I've got
    But in these days, and in times
    Guess that this is a long shot
    More or less the ugliness is going
    to make it all rot
    But oh what of a beautiful interior
    that people forgot

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    ccslim commented on Shattered Souls

    10-31-2009

    Lol great write! Living a life knowing what is inside is what matters! The only thing that felt odd is line five but I know it has to be hidden in breath.
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    Niecy commented on Shattered Souls

    02-22-2009

    People in life sometimes makes you feel like this. Every once in a blue moon I'm wrought up in this cocoon. Inspired by a friend's pain my pen expressed her claim. I wrote... 'Accept Me' you read at your leisure. Although I believe love is for her! Keep writing what your soul speaks, so that your heart won't weep! :)
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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