Show Me

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    Show Me
    As I lay down to the darkness
    dreams of you envelop me
    and carry me to a place I do not know.
    Conflicting feelings well deep within ~
    I want to run, my feet betray me.
    I want to leave, my heart makes me stay.
    Emotions overrun common sense
    I let myself fall into this trap
    out of which only you
    can show me the way.
    I wait, suffering, seeking solace for my pain.
    Please, let me go, I will not run away.
    Please, I want out, and yet I want to stay.
    Please, show me the way.

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    lightcourier commented on Show Me

    04-22-2009

    I really like the way you expressed inner conflict here. Good poem. Thanks!
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