Smiles

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    Smiles

     Smiles
    pay botox
    to be
    wrinkle free

    Wrinkles
    would I pay
    for smiles
    to see

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    gypsyf8 commented on Smiles

    10-30-2009

    i think this is a great poem . . . .a wonderful reflection on what is really important in life!!!
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    wheelsal commented on Smiles

    07-28-2009

    So much said in so few words. This is the ultimate of making every words count and what poetry is all about. Sally
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    wheelsal

    07/28/2009

    Can't believe the low rating on this!!!!

    RHPeat commented on Smiles

    07-28-2009

    The nursery rhyme poem. Interesting to see written for adults. It is far more didactic than metaphorical in nature. It has the shape of a smile if it's put on its side. It could become a concrete poem if it were to be put on the page in that manner. Which would give it a tad more metaphorical intent. That would fall under the Charles Olson category of poetry. A poet friend// RH Peat
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    Jaycee

    07/28/2009

    A concrete poem, that would be interesting, will have to give it a try.

    exclusivelye commented on Smiles

    07-23-2009

    I'll take the Botox, thank you very much! Silly poem. Entertaining.
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    SpiritSong commented on Smiles

    07-12-2009

    i like this...what a great play on thought and words.. short and fun and oh so accurately true a??? LoL!...Thanks Jaycee
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    Jaycee

    07/13/2009

    Thank you for taking the time to let me know your thoughts!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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