'STAR'

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  • Lost Love
    • KillrBlu
    • is tired of being tested when will it be smooth sailing for a while???

    'STAR'

    When you look up into the dark night sky, a bright,twinkling star catches your eye...and you look at this shining star everynight, gaze and dream in its brilliance...

    Till one night you look up at that star, not seeming to burn quit as bright, but the star next to it seems to burn much brighter and catches the corner of your eye...and you loose yourself once again to a new vibrant star and as you gaze an wonder in its light, the star you left behind seemed to of fizzled and fadded...

    Till once again as you look up into the dark night sky... there! Another star burns even brighter than the star that fizzled and faded and more so than the one you looked at just the night before...

    Then one night you look up into the night sky, days and nights have gone by...and as you look up, that star, that fizzled and faded, never died...its always been there burning bright and dazzaling all along...only now catching someone else's eye

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    trocka7 commented on 'STAR'

    09-12-2009

    I love stars, so this really spoke to me! I loved it, really great insight :)

    Nadia1986 commented on 'STAR'

    07-18-2009

    Very true about people and love sometimes you think you love someone but then later in life you find your real love and this love is better then the one you used to have.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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