starting over

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  • Confusion

    starting over

    in and out the days are passing,
    thoughts of crying,thoughts of laughing,
    tired of the sound of one hand clapping,
    lost in myself and my minds trappings,
    a time to live,time to kill
    holding on,where's the thrill?
    moving on, not sitting still,
    life's painful journey, is this real?
    too awake to sleep, too tired to play
    how can i not waste the day?
    too broken to run, too restless to stay,
    most of what i was, was thrown away,
    fear in my head, courage in my heart,
    put things togather to tear them apart,
    confusion sets in, is this something smart?
    starting all over, with nowhere to start.

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    MarionYost commented on starting over

    11-02-2009

    Okay, Now I'M confused, every time I think I've found your ABSOLUTE best.. I read another one that blows me away... This is exactly the type of poem I need to learn how to write.. Great job with this. Take care all the best -Marion-
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    shortie13086 commented on starting over

    10-29-2009

    wow this is awesome and it does help thank you!!!!
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    aweems commented on starting over

    10-15-2009

    tHIS IS REALLY GOOD TOO. I LIKE IT ALLOT. LIFE IS CONFUSING WHEN U DO GET TORE DOWN ONCE IN UR LIFE AND UR AFRAID TO START OVER. I KNOW I AM SCARRED TO.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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