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    right here

    as you lay your head in sweetest dream,
    and slumber peaceful and serene,
    i close my eyes and dream im there,
    holding you close and stroking your hair,
    though miles between us seem so far,
    its the time away that makes it hard,
    but fret not my sweet,my dear,
    although our path in not quite clear,
    my heart,my love is always right here

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    MarionYost commented on right here

    11-02-2009

    AWWWEEEE, That's Sweet. Are you a "Closet Hopeless Romantic"???? this is good. As you know, I like Darker stuff, but this is great. Take care All the best -Marion-

    aweems commented on right here

    10-15-2009

    I really love this one i kept it in my phone . your writing is amazing

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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