the war in me

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    the war in me
    all i have is all i am
    and all i am is a broken man
    hollow heart and empty soul
    all my dreams are frozen,cold
    anger is burning inside my head
    crazed and furious, and seeing red
    to those who have taken all my joy
    has the hatred in my heart deployed
    my heart,my child,my son
    stolen from me,the war begun
    all you've done is to set free
    the faersome warrior inside of me
    i will not stop,i will not fail
    this fathers love WILL prevail

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    MarionYost commented on the war in me

    10-20-2009

    I LOVE this one, So powerful.... Wow, My dad's the same way very protective... Your Kids are lucky. -All the best.. -Marion-
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