stingray

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stingray

Sharp ridges of metal.
Light in weight.
Powerful in operation.
Mundain out of service.
With a flick of the wrist.
The spark.
The fuel.
The air.
A symphony so perfect.
Orchastrated perfectly.
We have ignition.
The rumble, the smell of gas.
The violence, the vibration.
The beat of its own drum.
Pulsing sound waves.
Crushing glass.
Hands of sweat,knuckles of white.
Brow raised, eyes open.
Teeth clinched.
Park then drive.
From brake to accelerate.
Power and thrust,return with a smile.
Sweet is the air.
Sweet is the taste
My lady
My ray
My stingray
Oh , I have betrayed
Sweet is the memory
forgive me
is the key

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dumplin commented on stingray

10-23-2009

Hmmmmm, I am speechless. I thought the stingray was a boat until I read the last couple of lines. Now I'm confused.

rougepriest commented on stingray

08-20-2009

Oh my god you crashed it!? the agony the pain the deep regret never to forget, oh jeezuz I cant bear it myself you must replace it to ever feel good again!

kijealy commented on stingray

08-10-2009

that was beautiful...freakin ride 4 the mind! totally awesume!

nadronnoco

08/17/2009

hello ty for reading my poem

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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