STRONGER & STRONGER

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STRONGER & STRONGER

To see how i'm treated,when i'm at my least,
When you laugh & smile it makes me a beast,,
I'll be good ,my turns coming it'll be a feast,
So,what i did sometime,i'm still a man,
But, when i walked out,i knew how too stand,
I'm patient todat,its all part of my plan,
A few 24's ago , i would've took the first thing
an ran, 
When i had it,i gave it with no sweat,
It's a different thing when it comes to me
this i'm willing to bet,
People change its cool,i'm just getting my feet wet,
Throughout it all i kept it real,til i stood by myself,
No one knows me now,i have no more cash left,
an a way, i'm glad they just playing there self,
Now ,i need some dough but.there's no one from
whom, i can borrow,
Damn, good as i am,someone should feel some
sorrow,
This is my foundation,that'l be solid come tomorrow,
To learn it's few ,thats cut from the clothe thats
genuine,
Only a few have survived from the places that
i've been,
I gotta make it, i done made it from a life of sin,
One day at a time,always remembering i've lost
some friends,
When the circle stops,i know how to do things the
right way,
Feeding off reactions most of the time,by what
you say,
I can feel it inside me, i'm still growing every single
day,
Then thank THE LORD for me maling it through
another day,
Hoping his will includes me prospering,while living
longer,
Bring it on, all the things that makes me feel wronger,
I'm in the gym,i need it too get me
STRONGER & STRONGER....
                                            by J.L.S


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Nikki36 commented on STRONGER & STRONGER

10-22-2009

I understand the struggles of today and yesterday. I also understand how it feels to have no help but to keep moving forward.Great poem

jim2009

01/20/2010

sorry for the delayed response ive ben away from writing for awhile..anyway thank you sooo much!!! i am adding new poems now so check me out!!!

photochick commented on STRONGER & STRONGER

09-01-2009

fantastic poem about the battles and struggles you have been through its full of hope for a better day tomorrow powerful great rhythm and flow I really liked this one keep it up as always i really enjoyed your poem your passion for life and better days are very vivid here great write a 10 from me

jim2009

09/01/2009

thank you so much

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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