Before He Was Famous

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    Before He Was Famous

    He was looked at as if he was nothing,
    cheated on as if he did something,
    this accepted he's looking straight ahead,
    he's nothing to offer now everyone has fled,
    so he's ignored better yet looked over,
    it's not like he's got money or driving a rover,
    forget him he won'y be forgotten or missed,
    lets walk all over him,so what he'll be pissed,
    now what has happen the tables has turned,
    maybe he'll forgive us for all the times
    he was burned,
    he won't forget what he didn't earn,
    when he looks back there is a lesson he has
    learned,
    an we can't be mad because he blames us,
    for teasing him while he running trying to catch
    up with the bus,
    never did he cry,complain or even fuss,
    at what's happen to him BEFORE HE WAS FAMOUS..
                                                     by J,L.S

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    Lolee commented on Before He Was Famous

    08-22-2009

    He who laughs, laughs last, and here's a good example. Good poem! Keep up the good work...and I'm still readin ya.

    jim2009

    08/23/2009

    thanks i been checking you out too.so i'm very appreciative to have you comment on this .thanks soo much

    photochick commented on Before He Was Famous

    08-20-2009

    wow this is very deep you have a way with words and had me hooked from the first line to the last very powerful nice flow as well cant wait to read more of your work thanks for sharing this

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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