love to lose

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    love to lose

    love to lose
    In life we love things an treat them with care,
    but the results of your caring may turn out unfair,
    i once had a father whom i barely even knew,
    i looked up to him so much he disappeared befor i grew,
    being without a big brother or father guidance i didn't have a clue,
    i remember having a good job which paid a lot of dough,
    i loved this job so much i learned everything it was to know,
    a dependable worker with this company plus willing to grow,
    working really hard daily this i continued without a pause,
    i went to work early one day to get fired without a cause,
    There once was this women i loved very very much,
    i loved the time we spent especially the way she touched,
    Being loving and considerate was why she left me without a crutch,
    I've tried to make it last being careful about what i choose,
    Regardless of my decisions i still end up lonely singing the blues,
    Whenever i stay devoted i end up confused,
    i need to stop loving because whom or whatever I LOVE,I LOSE

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    Lolee commented on love to lose

    08-22-2009

    It is better to have loved and lost than to not have loved at all. Keep right on loving my friend...If you don't, your whole personality will change! You will soon be writing poems that are bitter and full of angst. Soooo, keep up the good work and keep that heart tender....and love God, He will lead you to the right one.

    jim2009

    08/23/2009

    hey you know what he already has led me to myself.that where it starts for me because,if i'm not here for myself then i can't be here for anyone not even him.thanks GOG bless you

    Tybecca commented on love to lose

    05-09-2009

    Be encouraged and never give up. Reading some of your other poems it shows some of the struggles you have survived through from the choices that you made, the good thing is that you lerned from those experiences keep writing I quite sure you will be able to help some one. We need more males to speak to our young males not to make the same mistakes they have made where the choices that they have made makes life alot harder when they have a criminal record the options for them change

    jim2009

    06/13/2009

    hey thxs thats why i write to inspire.

    Tybecca commented on love to lose

    05-09-2009

    See the key factor is God, God created us to love, and to love one another so that our joy may be full, but see the devil will attack and send us through so many different obstacles but the key factor is never give up hope or love trust and believe in God and all things are possible if we only believe and God has a way of opening more doors that are better than the ones that were closed for us if we trust him and follow his ways

    jim2009

    07/07/2009

    hey tybecca i listen to your comments,u on point majority of the time.me i have so many poems,so many,so many so i tried to put something that everyone can relate to,i was thinkin different poems for different people hoping one of the 10 that i put on here will get someone attention.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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