IF YOU REALLY WANT IT

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IF YOU REALLY WANT IT

To live longer,to be happy ina healthy relationship,
you mustn't argue,stay mad or even decide to trip,
just stay focus,think positive before you slip,
work hard everyday for it,then if meant it'll come
to you,
don't go astray look forward no matter what you go
threw,
learn to forgive,remember things that you must do,
keep a open mind,follow the road that you must
pursue,
plan ahead because,if you fail to plan then you plan
to fail,
don't give up on what you want then say what the hell,
when the going gets rough,only a coward would bail,
where there's honesty&trust that ship will sail,
A Higher Power you should read his words from
Genesis to Revelations,
have faith in your actions with no hesitations,
make sure to pray about it,there's your motivation,
material things are o.k,but they don't last forever,
if you want what's not deserved,then you'll do whateva,
think about your actions,you have to stay clever,
learn from the mistakes so the next time you'll do
better,
get up! go out!get it!if, you really want it,
don't participate in drugs,crime or even bet on it,
we all get whats meant an thats what we'll get,
why try to force something, that will not fit,
the main thing is do GOD'S WILL not yours
IF YOU REALLY WANT IT!!!!
                                          by J.L.S 

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ansari commented on IF YOU REALLY WANT IT

06-12-2010

Its a marvellous poem, i just loved it, so much of sense, should be pasted on your mirror to read it everyday, said so lucidly..beautiful rhyming.. anyone will listen to common sense when its said your style. great. a 10 from me.

jademelissa74 commented on IF YOU REALLY WANT IT

08-31-2009

The life before one dies should emit angelical sounds, it should be greatly desired, more than gems and diamonds. No price should ever match its worth. It must be filled with greatness, toughness and talent, in several ways inspiring and funny. Your invitation is well conveyed. Amazingly arranged. :))

jim2009

09/01/2009

That means sooo much too me coming from you..thanks for the time and comment.i would feel more blessed if you could tell me what you think about some of my other poems..while i check out your poetry..lol

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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