Subtle Thoughts…

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" Love is what love does... an emotion that one possesses for a person or thing; don't use love as an excuse to explain or describe what the mind has interpreted... experience and accept the fruits of love from what your heart and soul are offering."

Subtle Thoughts…

A kiss may not always reveal or be the truth…

But it is what we wish were true—

I’ve searched for, betrayed, and have had my rendezvous with love,

And while on this journey, I’ve come to realize…

That you’ll never really experience true love,

Until you surrender to it—

As the path to my destiny gradually winds to an end,

I still find myself alone on this journey, asking myself…

Why is it that I don’t recognize love when it begins

But I always know when love ends?

Today… I surrender all—

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thejazzpoet commented on Subtle Thoughts…

05-21-2010

Love requires giving; it is just as important as receiving; sharing and compromise. With love, there must be understanding; this requires patience and commitment.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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